Hey guys it's me, Bbarnes005/(2142)Gen.Reaper/Gen.Reaper/(2142)President Reaper...look for a quite a while now I've been attempting to make stories based off my popular Garry's Mod posing series, the Human-Combine Wars which focuses on a multi-dimensional war between the universes of  TF2, HL2, L4D, Empires, and two dimensions of my own creation and I have posted two of these stories on FanFiction.net under the Half-Life and Team Fortress Crossover category there. However due to the way that Fanfiction.net is organized, crossovers such as the Human-Combine Wars are largely unseen by a larger part of the community there which means they don't get very many views or for that matter reviews which could provide critical insight that can help me improve the quality of future stories and I always wish to provide high-quality content.

So all I am asking for is if some of you can spare some of your time to read the stories and do your best to provide constructive criticism so I can improve the quality of future works. You could also help me by showing me other sites where I can spot these stories where they would get more attention. If you're not interested in reading them, but know people who probably will, please tell them about the stories.

Links to the stories:
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I would post them here, but it keeps up messing up the format for some reason and my skills with HTML are pretty dodgy at best.

And you should also note that the Empires factions are called by different names in the stories, The Empire and the Northern Rebels. I did this to avoid trouble with FF.net's moderators.

Thanks for reading.

Sincerely
BBarnes005/(2142)Gen.Reaper/Gen.Reaper/(2142)President Reaper/(2142)General Reaper